1. What was your group's feedback?

Over all the feedback we received was quite positive, and most of things people said were things that we had either thought about ourselves or little things, that still will make a big difference in the show.
- We had a lot of shouting in our performance, and one of the things we were told was to think about if it was necessary in all of the parts. Also, annunciation whilst shouting is something we need to focus more on.
- In the scene where Max's character hits the servant, we need to make the actually hit more centred, since now it was hidden behind Sophie and Jenny, who are secondary in that particular part.
- Right at the beginning where me, Sophie and Jenny have our little introduction, we need to be standing in equal distances from each other and be more centred, since now Sophie was too close to me.
- We had good characters, which were easy to tell apart from each other, even though there is no props or costumes to separate each character from each other. Simply changing the way you stand and hold yourself helped us to present different characters more clearly.

2. What do you want to work on on Monday?

    

   We need to sort out the positioning in a lot of our scenes, especially the repeated scene, by going trough the scene together and really discussing, how can the main thing in the scene be seen and still look good to the audience. In the repeated scene, Sophie and Jenny could be on the sides, right from the beginning, and all what happens between my and Max's characters could so be more centred and the so the action more visible to the audience.